Friday, November 30, 2007

Haiku Friday

Defiant toddler
disdains her clothes. Why not be
cold, naked, and free?

Thunderstorm of tears.
Baby watches sister sob,
wide-eyed, curious.

Finally dressed, she's
sweeter than richest honey.
Schizophrenic tot.

9 comments:

ScienceMama said...

"why not be cold, naked and free?"

that is going to have me laughing for days! and i love the thunderstorm of tears!

ScienceGirl said...

I love it how you make the moment seem so real in just a few short lines!

arduous said...

that's great! i love these haikus.

CresceNet said...
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iwsfutcmd said...

the legume watches the bean
she learns leaps and bounds
the latest naked storm dance

Rana said...

oops i logged in on my friend's account. this is nana

Rana said...
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The bean-mom said...

Nana,

I was wondering who iwsfutcmt was, leaving poetry on my site... (love the "naked storm dance", by the way!)

Ophelia Rising said...

I love your haikus! What a great idea!

I look forward to reading more.